Retirement Pyramid 2.0

Last week I created a  semi-barbaric version of The Retirement Pyramid.

Some constructive criticism included, “use a pen” and “stop dotting your eyes like a little girl.”

I have lots of creative ideas but my fine motor skills are severely lacking.

 

A reader who calls herself Sequentialkady came to the rescue on Friday.

She added some stuff and even included a quote from Henry Rollins.

While still a work in progress. Here is the new and improved version.

Much better but not perfect.

We are looking forward to seeing the final version.

1970-1980’s Punk Band references are greatly appreciated.