Last week I created a semi-barbaric version of The Retirement Pyramid.
Some constructive criticism included, “use a pen” and “stop dotting your eyes like a little girl.”
I have lots of creative ideas but my fine motor skills are severely lacking.
"an astounding 80 million Americans are in debt collection and 50% of retirement-aged workers have next to nothing saved."
Any artists want to take a crack at redoing Tony’s pyramid, let’s see it. https://t.co/59IVy6t2mO
— Downtown Josh Brown (@ReformedBroker) May 19, 2018
A reader who calls herself Sequentialkady came to the rescue on Friday.
She added some stuff and even included a quote from Henry Rollins.

While still a work in progress. Here is the new and improved version.

Much better but not perfect.
We are looking forward to seeing the final version.
"Any artists want to take a crack at redoing Tony’s pyramid, let’s see it."
OK, you're on! Watch this space @RitholtzWealth @ATeachMoment @ReformedBroker @finplan— Chelsea Emery (@chelsea_emery) May 21, 2018
1970-1980’s Punk Band references are greatly appreciated.